Monday, September 12, 2016

Journal 2 Carly Gillingham


Bitzer and Edbauer present two theoretical ways to interpret writing. In summation, Bitzer discusses the importance of the various elements of the context in which rhetoric is taking place in order for persuasion to take place; Edbauer introduces the idea of a “rhetorical ecology,” similar to a biological ecology where rhetoric is used as a verb, and he also discusses the importance of shifting elements in the ecology/situation.
The piece of writing that I will use to discuss more in-depth these two points of view is the following article:
It is entitled, “Stanford Rapist Brock Turner Might Be Out of Jail Already but Those Protesting His Case Are Just Getting Started: Meet two women leading protests against Turner, Judge Aaron Persky, and rape culture.” I found the article from Cosmopolitan Magazine’s Snapchat story, which is a guilty pleasure of mine and something that I mindlessly peruse each morning, since it updates every day. Cosmo is notorious for its mindless and over the top, superficial articles, but this one, which is an interview with two women protesting the Brock Turner case, is more serious and in-depth. The two women discuss their experience protesting rape culture with fellow activists.
Bitzer would view this interview and the women’s discourse as a result of situation/context. They are being interviewed, so they will include in their responses as much detail as possible, not only for the sake of readers’ understanding, but also for the sake of their organizations, GRLCVLT and Fvck Rape Culture. So, a large part of their situation is both a PR opportunity and an opportunity to get the word out about their cause. Additionally, the exigence, or thing waiting to be done, according to Bitzer, is the continuing presence of that which they are protesting and the lack of knowledge that the public holds on rape culture. The audience is Cosmo readers, who are vastly female, which influences the women’s discourse.
According to Edbauer, this analysis is true but superficial. Edbauer would view the deeper “ecological” network in which the women are being interviewed. They are getting the word out about their feminist cause, which means that their language/discourse is characteristically striving toward change. This interview inherently acknowledges the ability for audience and environment to change. Especially given that this is a piece of writing published on the internet, the audience is ambiguous; it could be anybody perusing Snapchat or Cosmo. This is the type of “public rhetoric” that Edbauer discussed in her article. Audience and exigence, according to Edbauer, cannot be isolated here because of the constantly changing interactions.

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